​​Week 6
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​​Select your name and paste your url. Notetakers will write notes underneath your name.

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​​Yeowon (first responder: Angel, notetaker: Annie)
​​http://artfiles.rutgers.edu/~choiy@art.rutgers.edu/1b/
​​Concept: sunglasses - vacation idea associated, effects of something showing through sunglasses cutout, escape theme
  • ​​neat, viewfinder, abstracts from everything else and see only whats in the glasses, 2nd easier to view bc of stationary sunglasses
  • ​​illusion of sunglasses still on screen when not
  • ​​preference of first, more content, dynamic
  • ​​likes first, glasses function of seeing, escape to beach, fun times, motion, color scheme, harts, youth and adventure, good composition
  • ​​interesting composition and found footage, video on top of video, vacation and discovery feel coming through, Lolita book cover 
  • ​​interesting background w red and pink effect
  • ​​shaded sunglasses tint 
  • ​​cyclical motion is nice, but zoom out more, awk moment where it is empty, pink not fully aligned to art board
  • ​​fluid motion, clear concept, few refinements to tighten it
  • ​​no need of black on the text poster, work w scale, 70s style type works well w theme
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​​Angel (first responder: Annie, notetaker: Lauren C)
​​http://artfiles.rutgers.edu/~reyesa@art.rutgers.edu/1b/
  • ​​Montage of cigarettes and how they were depicted as appealing/pleasurable 
  • ​​If cigarette commercials were still shown on TV now 
  • ​​Text is hard to read- fades away fast
  • ​​Concept is a clever way to show the cigarette commercials 
  • ​​Wording in gifs get in the way of the main text added
  • ​​Idea is good
  • ​​Collage affect or scrapbooking
  • ​​If the text wasn’t red it would be more readable and have more contrast
  • ​​Love and cigarette relationship identifiable
  • ​​Didn’t orginally want gif text 
  • ​​explore more of your own POV on commercials on smoking cigarettes 
  • ​​A lot of things to look at
  • ​​Duplications are distracting
  • ​​Is red text necessary?
  • ​​Feeling of advertising with message- like a vintage ad
  • ​​Text of gifs and red text is competing- either have one or the other
  • ​​Play around with negative space- with an organic shape  
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​​Annie (first responder: Lauren C, notetaker: Jina)
​​http://artfiles.rutgers.edu/~cheng@art.rutgers.edu/1b/
  • ​​Mass production of rose
  • ​​A rose is just a rose
  • ​​Repetition of rose gets point across well
  • ​​Text goes well with animation
  • ​​First animation is a reminder of picking the petals off roses
  • ​​First animation reminder of a symbolic meaning and the second animation has a different meaning that don’t relate 
  • ​​Both graphically interesting with shapes that connect to make rose form 
  • ​​Maybe explore other contexts of roses- photo collage
  • ​​Interesting as a series