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Week 10
Review notetakers and first responders
Midterm Critique
If you’re the
first responder
you respond to the project first. If you’re the
notetaker
, you’ll take notes during that person’s critique. Leave the notes on this document.
Order
Ellie
(first
responder: Simon, notetaker: Haoyu)
Simon
(first
responder: Haoyu, notetaker: Natashia)
Cindy
(first
responder: Arani, notetaker: Demi)
Arani
(first
responder: Esther, notetaker: Esther)
Esther
(first
responder: Trevor, notetaker: Arani)
Trevor
(first
responder: Haoyu, notetaker: Honglin)
Honglin
(first
responder: Olivia, notetaker: Rebecca)
Haoyu
(first
responder: Natashia, notetaker: Cindy)
Olivia
(first
responder: Rebecca, notetaker: McKayla)
Rebecca
(first
responder: McKayla, notetaker: Alicia)
McKayla
(first
responder: Alicia, notetaker: Nico)
Alicia
(first
responder: Nico, notetaker: Ellie)
Nico
(first
responder: Ellie, notetaker: Simon)
Demi
(first
responder: Esther, notetaker: Trevor)
ABSENT
Natashia, Shreya
Notetakers, take notes here:
Rebecca
Project URL:
https://rebeccawang1.github.io/rebecca/
-Wrap the page into a container that allows for better sizing when minimized to mobile mode.
-Consider the reasoning behind the organization of the videos: level of volume/movement.
-Idea turned a really interesting direction, nice!
McKayla
Project URL:
https://lankaukk.github.io/crack/
-Felt very experiential/spatial
-Perhaps adding a visual element to indicate the intention behind some of the sounds on a black screen
-May be more effective when all three videos can be seen together or in quicker succession
Alicia
Project URL:
https://leea817.github.io/yugen/
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Midterm Critique