​​️​🌸​ Final Critique – Personal Data

​​​✨​Thank you everyone for your hard work this semester! I’ve enjoyed working with you all and am excited to see you experimenting in the browser. There has been tremendous growth and development from all of you. I’m very much looking forward to seeing how your work evolves beyond this class. Please feel free to stay in touch! ​✨​

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​​​👉​To submit your final:
  1. ​​Paste your URL by your name in the notes section of this doc so that we can look at it in class
  1. ​​Also submit it on Canvas (Project – Personal Data)
  1. ​​Please make sure all your activities and reading presentation are turned in.
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​​Presentation Order

​​Cecily (1R: Jason, 2R: Rachel, N: Larry)
​​Jason (1R: Rachel, 2R: Larry, N: Paris)
​​Rachel (1R: Larry, 2R: Paris, N: Ruth)
​​Larry (1R: Paris, 2R: Ruth, N: Antonia)
​​Paris (1R: Ruth, 2R: Antonia, N: Will)
​​Ruth (1R: Antonia, 2R: Will, N: Sherry)
​​Antonia (1R: Will, 2R: Sherry, N: Cindy)
​​Will (1R: Sherry, 2R: Cindy, N: Cecily)
​​Sherry (1R: Cindy, 2R: Cecily, N: Jason)
​​Cindy (1R: Cecily, 2R: Jason, N: Rachel)
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​​Notes

​​Cecily

​​url: https://cecilynish.github.io/projects/personaldata/index.html 

  • ​​likes the slider and descriptions to show opinion and thoughts
  • ​​Also enjoys the archive to learn more about each outfit
  • ​​All enjoy the interactivity and the personalization of the small anecdotes 
  • ​​Tension between casual / lofi and the typographic language
  • ​​It is a nice balance to have the data set and the interactive part that is more personal
  • ​​Hovering could provide a little more personal commentary 
  • ​​Nice that it is slow, quite and contained 
  • ​​Really like the attention to detail with the scroll bars that were added
  • ​​The scroll bar is a nice touch of detail for the UI system of the website

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​​Jason 

​​url: https://jasont2022.github.io/projects/data-viz/index.html

  • ​​likes the simplicity of the shapes and of the interactions - not overwhelming
  • ​​maybe make it more clear that the shapes correspond to the hours spent studying - there was some confusion about this
  • ​​nice job creating your own language to represent data
  • ​​could integrate heading font into the rest of the project more
  • ​​including the hex code of the color is a nice detail
  • ​​If you continue working on it, can think more about interactions in the legend
  • ​​Integrate navigation buttons into a more prominent location

​​Rachel

​​url: rachelshapiro.github.io/projects/personal-data2/index.html

  • ​​wants the data blocks to randomly scatter throughout the screen, and on date hover, only data related to that date shows up