​​​⛄​️ Critique – Personal Data

​​​✨​Thank you everyone for your hard work this semester! I’ve enjoyed working with you all and am excited to see you experimenting in the browser. There has been tremendous growth and development from all of you. I’m very much looking forward to seeing how your work evolves beyond this class. Please feel free to stay in touch! ​✨​

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​​​👉​To submit your final:
  1. ​​Paste your URL by your name in the notes section of this doc so that we can look at it in class
  1. ​​Also submit it on Canvas (Project – Personal Data)
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​​Presentation Order

  1. ​​Sylvia (1R: Tarah, N: Jihu)
  1. ​​Ashley (1R: Jihu, N: Sarah)
  1. ​​Jihu (1R: Sarah, N: Becky)
  1. ​​Sarah (1R: Becky, N: Egret)
  1. ​​Becky (1R: Egret, N: Janice)
  1. ​​Egret (1R: Janice, N: Kristine)
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  1. ​​Janice (1R: Kristine, N: Catherine)
  1. ​​Kristine (1R: Catherine, N: Tarah)
  1. ​​Catherine( 1R: Tarah, N: Lindsay)
  1. ​​Tarah (1R: Linday, N: Amy)
  1. ​​Lindsay (1R: Amy, N: Sylvia)
  1. ​​Amy (1R: Sylvia, N: Ashley)
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​​Notes

​​Sylvia (1R: Tarah, N: Jihu)

​​url: https://syzhao53.github.io/syzhao/projects/personal-data/index.html
​​notes: 
​​likes
  • ​​could be used as desktop background
  • ​​good job on making it stand out but also keeping it simple
​​suggestions
  • ​​updates time
  • ​​maybe all stacked together/collage to expand from gradient background
  • ​​something like the google extension to personalize it more

​​Ashley (1R: Jihu, N: Sarah)

​​url: https://amrobin99.github.io/ashleyart21/projects/data/
​​notes:
​​likes
  • ​​very seasonal
  • ​​use of color and lightbulbs
  • ​​observing how many ads there are is a good idea in bottom right
​​suggestions
  • ​​try clicking in a different order
  • ​​play video first or embed video, then click on lightbulb and stats on ad show up
  • ​​had all the bars at the bottom in one place to compare the differences 

​​Jihu (1R: Sarah, N: Becky)

​​url: https://jihu8282.github.io/jihukim.github.io/personaldata/index.html
​​notes: