​​​🌼​ Critique 4– Input/Output

​​Reminders

  1. ​​You can re-submit any projects as long as they were originally turned in on time by Tuesday 05/11 at 11:59pm. Please email me and comment on the assignment in Canvas once it’s updated.
  1. ​​As communicated by Lynn Kiang in the general announcements channel, you need to submit your CD Lecture write ups by Friday 5/7 via Slack or email.
  1. ​​Please also submit your reading presentation on Canvas.
  1. ​​Sophomore work collection is due 05/14/2021 at 11pm
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​​Structure

​​I’m dividing the class into 2 groups of 8. You’re only required to stay in the Zoom for the all class intro and then during your group’s presentations, but you’re welcome to stay for both groups if you’d like. Please link your project below your name. 
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​​You’ll notice that each person has been assigned a first responder (1R), and notetaker (N). The first responder (1R) will kick off our discussion as soon as the presenter has finished sharing their work. The notetaker will listen carefully and document the highlights of the critique on our document.
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​​Please also submit your assignment on Canvas.
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​​Group 1: 9:00 AM EST

​​Michelle K., Julia, Tingyue, Michelle N., Jillian, Kashish, Luna, Gia

​​Group 2: 10:20 AM EST

​​Kristy, Lara, Isabella, Yuka, Whitley, Chichi, Lou, Yuk Hei
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​​Group 1 Notes

​​Michelle K. (1R: Julia, N: Tingyue)

​​Url: https://kimm625.github.io/input-output/home.html
​​Notes: 
  • ​​Animals, blending with nature.
  • ​​The background can be changed from one scene to another, and can be changed when a particular pattern is selected.
  • ​​The trajectory of the graph is very interesting.
  • ​​Looks like a special effect on TikTok.
  • ​​Consider giving the user a hint about different scenarios on the start page.
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​​Julia (1R: Tingyue, N: Michelle N.)

​​Url: http://localhost:3000/homeindex.html
​​Notes: 
  • ​​Question mark triggers the answer
  • ​​Works in live time, other users can observe other’s questions
  • ​​Not necessarily needed to go back to the title
  • ​​Set color palette and design aesthetic
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​​Tingyue (1R: Michelle N, N: Jillian)

​​Url:https://tingyue-wang-input-output.glitch.me/gallery
​​Notes:
​​www:
  • ​​“pill” connotations usually negative, but site is leaning towards being more playful