​​​❄️​Critique 1 – Cross-Platform Storytelling
​​I’m dividing the class into 2 groups of 8. You’re only required to stay in the Zoom during your group’s presentations, but you’re welcome to stay for both if you’d like. Please link your project below where it says “url” underneath your name.
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​​You’ll notice that each person has been assigned a first responder (1R), and notetaker (N). The first responder (1R) will kick off our discussion as soon as the presenter has finished sharing their work. The notetaker will listen carefully and document the highlights of the critique on our document.
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​​Please also submit your assignment on Canvas.
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​​When critiquing, these are the questions we should consider:
  • ​​What parts of the project were most effective?
  • ​​What parts were weak—what would have helped?
  • ​​Any questions left unanswered?
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​​Group 1: 9:00 AM EST

​​Whitley, Yuk Hei, Kashish, Gia, Isabella, Chichi, Yuka, Kristy

​​Group 2: 10:20 AM EST

​​Julia, Lou, Tingyue, Jillian, Lara., Michelle N., Luna, Michelle K.
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​​Which stood out to the class? Feel free to add a link below

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​​https://leeg827.github.io/the%20egg/index.html
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​​https://darbw698.github.io/whitley-darby-cross-platform-storytelling-project-1/index.html
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​​Lou’s project
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​​Group 1

​​Whitley (1R: Yuk Hei, N: Kashish)

​​url: https://darbw698.github.io/whitley-darby-cross-platform-storytelling-project-1/index.html
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​​Notes
  • ​​Clear tone and consistent style 
  • ​​Maybe stylize the links/ change the color of the link 
  • ​​Try another layout for the page with Polaroids/ try bigger images 
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​​Yuk Hei (1R: Kashish, N: Gia)

​​url:
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​​Notes
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​​Kashish (1R: Gia, N: Isabella)

​​url: