2020 Series Critique
Today is our first critique! Most of our critiques will follow this format, and we’ll bring in special guests for later projects. If you had technical difficulties, please present your current work and I’ll take a look at it with you next class.

Critique Info

In our critique structure, there are three active roles: the presenter, the first responder (1r), and the notetaker (N).

If you’re the presenter, you’ll share your screen and walk us through your project. You’ll talk about your intentions, process, troubles, and design decisions. Once the presenter is done, the first responder will jump in and kick off our discussion. The notetaker will closely listen to the comments and take notes on this dropbox paper. The notetaker will summarize key findings so that we have an archival records, and so that the presenter can review the notes after they present, so they can focus on the discussion during their critique.

If you are marked as the “1r” you are the first responder. If you are marked “N” you are the notetaker and will take notes on this page.

Critique Order

Xin (1r: Michelle, N: Victoria)
Michelle (1r: Victoria, N: Lauren)
Victoria (1r: Lauren, N: Bryn)
Lauren (1r: Bryn, N: Ki)
Bryn (1r: Ki, N: Sonia)
Ki (1r: Sonia, N: Sarah M.)
Sonia (1r: Sarah M., N: Selina)
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Sarah M. (1r: Selina, N: Erica)
Selina (1r: Erica, N: Rachel)
Erica (1r: Rachel, N: Katie)
Rachel (1r: Katie,, N: Benjamin)
Katie (1r: Benjamin, N: Xin)
Benjamin (1r: Xin, N: Michelle)

Notes

Place your URL after your name


Xin

Notes:

  • three pages total
  • focused on “on campus life” since March 2020 
  • Xin witnessed how campus changed since COVID  
  • took photos from 5pm-5:30 from Sept 14th-18th 
  • photos are from campus during the weekday
  • each photo has a time-mark 
  • clicking on each photo takes to a new page that describes the moment (photo-diary-esque) 
  • main gallery page features a horizontal slide with all the photos 
 

Michelle

Notes:
-high quality, beautiful images
-images are very textural, color changes add interest